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The wistful wind
The tide of the trees
The red and gold color
Of crisp fallen leaves

The vast green floor
And blue tapestries
Blew right through me
With the gentle breeze

My peaceful heart
Knows its home
This great rock
Of which I roam
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:iconmissmirele:
great rhyming. Love the simplicity and the imagery. Well done!
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~Shamoneness Oct 30, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you! c:
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*AkashasDreamworld Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I adore your imagery! ;) This piece is short but it is rich and pure (:

-Avy (yeah it's me again)
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~Shamoneness Oct 25, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you! ^-^
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*AkashasDreamworld Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome! (:
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*MusicAddict26 Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Short and sweet, a really good poem!
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~Shamoneness Oct 24, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you! C:
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*MusicAddict26 Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :D
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~undeadfreak16 Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is SO amazing! It's short, but It conveys so much. It paints the perfect picture, of the one place you will always have. The description of fall is so perfect. I saw it in my head like I was walking through it. I love it! Great job!
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~Shamoneness Oct 20, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you so so much! <3
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